In class writing- reflection
https://youtu.be/9FkDNWOYiFI
I like our way that separating the stage into two parts, and i act with josh at the same time. There was one part that my performance is not connecting with their reading. So i quickly run to the bed. Moreover, i like our way of speaking the Spanish lines by different laguage. Also, i think we should have more actions to connect with the lines. Especially we could try to create the feeling of nature. After we discuss and perform, it helps a lot on memorizing the peom. For example, there’s action such as “wake up”. After we take actions of the lines, we could remember the basic meaning of the lines. It also helps us understand its deep meaning a lot since we should think of the actions to match the peom. We could better acknowledge the feeling that the author would like to create in the peom. For example, in the beginning of the peom. The lines is “enter the world refreshed by the hope.” I could get the feeling, which someone just wakes up to start a new day.
https://youtu.be/KBN0kcKLNBA
To be honest, i couldn’t understand what they are doing in the beginning. They are running around the bridge. And one person is standing on the bridge and speak out the lines, which kinds of highligh the lines. Their sounds of running affect the audience to listen carefully about what they are speaking. I think they could considerate more about adding some actions to display the meaning of the peom. Then, it gives a more specific message to the audience about the peom. However, I like their background music, which kinds of combining with their reading.
https://youtu.be/whicKONFpQU
They are reading the peom by stanzas one by one. I could hear that they read the lines emotionally. However, i suggest them to have more actions or body language to show the peom since their performance is not that attractive for the audience. So, it’s better to add more contexts or elements. Their voice is clear and i could clearly hear all the stanzas.
https://youtu.be/0YYtoFLrZQI
They have a lot of body language for each specific words, which helps the audience understand the meaning of the peom. Also, they are changing the person who reads the stanzas. They have a lot of movements on the stage. And the background music is pretty matching with the peom. They also cooperate with their partners to complete explaining one word. We could hear their voice clearly. However, they are laughing at the ending part, which also makes me laugh. I hope they could try to control since it gives the audience a feeling that they doesn’t take it seriously, even though it contains some comic elements.
https://youtu.be/4wH50j5tKN0
Their group is one of my favorite by combining the musical and peom together. The background with rhythms pretty matches their hip-pop. When Nan strarts to sing with the music, it is really appealing to the audience since it is kinds of peaceful and classical music. Moreover, it creates a contrast with Ivan’s hip-pop style. The contrast is more attractive. I think they could add more actions especially Ivan and David by performancing some hip-pop body language. They could have more movements on the stage. But i think their voice could be louder and clearer. Tehir groups really opens our mind that peom could also cooperate with hip-pop, which is pretty cool.
https://youtu.be/C-Pqv3AiutU
I like their ways of coming out to the stage.when Yun walks slowly towards the bridge. The light and background music create a feeling of refresh and natura. And i could hear that tehy are reading the peom emotionally. Their highlight the important stanzas by speaking louder and their reading have a flow of the peom. The ending part is three of them are getting together and the light is focusing on them.
https://youtu.be/KBN0kcKLNBA
To be honest, i couldn’t understand what they are doing in the beginning. They are running around the bridge. And one person is standing on the bridge and speak out the lines, which kinds of highligh the lines. Their sounds of running affect the audience to listen carefully about what they are speaking. I think they could considerate more about adding some actions to display the meaning of the peom. Then, it gives a more specific message to the audience about the peom. However, I like their background music, which kinds of combining with their reading.
https://youtu.be/whicKONFpQU
They are reading the peom by stanzas one by one. I could hear that they read the lines emotionally. However, i suggest them to have more actions or body language to show the peom since their performance is not that attractive for the audience. So, it’s better to add more contexts or elements. Their voice is clear and i could clearly hear all the stanzas.
https://youtu.be/0YYtoFLrZQI
They have a lot of body language for each specific words, which helps the audience understand the meaning of the peom. Also, they are changing the person who reads the stanzas. They have a lot of movements on the stage. And the background music is pretty matching with the peom. They also cooperate with their partners to complete explaining one word. We could hear their voice clearly. However, they are laughing at the ending part, which also makes me laugh. I hope they could try to control since it gives the audience a feeling that they doesn’t take it seriously, even though it contains some comic elements.
https://youtu.be/4wH50j5tKN0
Their group is one of my favorite by combining the musical and peom together. The background with rhythms pretty matches their hip-pop. When Nan strarts to sing with the music, it is really appealing to the audience since it is kinds of peaceful and classical music. Moreover, it creates a contrast with Ivan’s hip-pop style. The contrast is more attractive. I think they could add more actions especially Ivan and David by performancing some hip-pop body language. They could have more movements on the stage. But i think their voice could be louder and clearer. Tehir groups really opens our mind that peom could also cooperate with hip-pop, which is pretty cool.
https://youtu.be/C-Pqv3AiutU
I like their ways of coming out to the stage.when Yun walks slowly towards the bridge. The light and background music create a feeling of refresh and natura. And i could hear that tehy are reading the peom emotionally. Their highlight the important stanzas by speaking louder and their reading have a flow of the peom. The ending part is three of them are getting together and the light is focusing on them.
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