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revise

Blog post due -- what do you need to revise on your drafts to show more clarity, conviction, commitment, emotion, and overall strengthen your performance. Be specific on what you need to revise and why. 300 words.  I think the most important points that we should revise is the connection between two characters because in our originally scrips. There is only one scene to show our connection, which does not really indicates the relationship of two stories. So I think we should add more scene about the relationship between two characters and details about their connections. For example, we could make them have some connection. They have been friends for long time and they write letter to each other about their life. In the letter, we could use some monologue to indicate their life condition. Also, for night woman. The facts about her son has already dead should be more appeartly to the audience. Because it’s kinds of confused for the audience to recognize the point without any wo...

in class writing

1.  WHO AM I?   I’m acting as night woman whose husband is died. She is around 27 years old.  She works as a prostitude for Supporting her son. Her life goal is supporting her son to help him have a good education and have a better life.  2.  WHAT TIME IS IT?   Night at 2-3 a.m.  3.  WHERE AM I?     Haiti, her bedroom.  4.  WHAT SURROUNDS ME?   (Animate and inanimate objects-complete details of environment)    Beds, cigarette,  5.  WHAT ARE THE GIVEN CIRCUMSTANCES?   (Past, present, future and  all  of the events)    She had lover before who leaves and she is working as a prostitude.  6.  WHAT IS MY RELATIONSHIP?    She is the contrast of another character.  7.  WHAT DO I WANT?   She expresses her love to her son and also express her life situation is depressed and hopeless.  8....

proposal

New York woman and night woman I would like to combine the Night woman and New York day woman together to show the different life condition of Haiti woman. The night woman and New York day woman met each other in Celianne’s ceremony and they have been friends for ten years. They live in different life. The first scene would be the night woman. In the night woman, there are three characters included. At the beginning, I would like to let the night women to have a monologue to express about herself, which shows the background of their life and what she suffers everyday. Especially, we need to point out her love to her son. So there’s supposed to a scene that the night woman look at her son while he is sleeping. Then she would have a wisphere to herself about her son and her life. During the monologue, the lights should only focus on the woman and the background music should be sad and depressed with slow melody, which could show her emotion better. Later, when her son wakes up, there ...

Fall review

In general, the spring fall shows us clearly about the story and each of the character’s characteristic are appearantly. The acting of Iran is so impressive because I like the way how he expresses his character and kinds of adding some comedic into the play to attract the audience. I pretty like the acting between him and Mao. They show how their relationships change by which way and expresses the emotion well. Appeartly, the last scene is so impressive to me that the man finally recognized his identity. And he found out that he is the brother of Ivan’s character, which is so dramatic because they have been friends for such a long time.  The story shows mainly about two couples about how they meet with each other and finally get permission from the girl’s mother to get engaged. The whole play is so attractive because there are lots of comedic part, which makes me laugh a lot. I think the way how Iran expresses his character by using lots of exaggerate body language and fiscal ex...

25 things

5 senses: see, touch, hear, task, small, emotions, associations. 1. Dark light 2. Shadows on the bed 3. Long blood-red scarves 4. Firefly buzzes. 5. Slight whisper 6.transistor radio 7. Plug into his ears 8. Woman’s bed 9. Stories of ghost 10. Fingers 11. Flowers 12. Bougainvillea 13.fabrication 14. A dream that his father would come back 15. Stars 16. Smoke a dry tobacco 17. Piece-worker women march one another 18. Breath 19. Hopelessly 20. Depression 21. Son’s suit 22. Poor life situation 23. A doctor 24.a player named Alexsan 25. Love

in class writing discussion questions

1. Why does the author put epilogue at the end of the stories? How does it explain about author herself? The story named Epilogue basically displays the life conditions of women in the Haiti. They are unknowledgeable and live a life by following the “strict rules” of Haiti. They live dependently on their husbands and family. They have no freedom and rights to decide their own life. Everything they do is based on their family and being a woman. For example, at the beginning of the story, the author use a lot of sentences to describes their life conditions by using tone of “your mother”, which brings the readers into the story deeply. Your mother’s second rule went along with the first. Never have sex before marriage, and even after you marry, your shouldn’t say you enjoy it, or your husband won’t respect you.” I think the author kinds of talking about her own history through talking with the stories. Because she is also so afraid of talking to be a writer to her mother. Through the sto...

4 questions

Post 4 good thinking/discussion questions on your blog. The questions can refer to any story or stories in the book and/or the epilogue. 1. what is the connection with the author herself with the story Epilogue? GIve specific example to display? 2. what is the connection between the caroline's wedding and children in the sea? 3. The connections of all the stories describes what kinds of message to the readers? 4. in the New York day woman, do you think her mother find her own inner peace?