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WC final draft

Analysis of Laura based on Act 1, Scene 1,2 from “The Glass menagerie”  In a story filled with madness, sadness and hopeless, Laura plays an important role to show the reason of hopeless. I transformed the excerpts from Act 1, Scene 1 when Amanda, Tom and Laura were having a dinner. The scene basically emphasizes the background and situation of the family. Laura is quite nervous and depression while Amanda and Tom are fighting since she would like to have a cozy and warm family. Amanda's nagging about gentleman callers annoyed her, which shows she doesn't care about any gentleman callers. The whole scene describes Laura as a person who is immersed in the world which is filled with the glass menagerie. The scene is significant because it is the foundation of the whole story since it illustrates the background and their relationships. Moreover, the scene implies their strong personalities through fighting. The scene straightly points out Laura is so sensitive and different...

propless review

I think the “propless” is so wonderful and attract the audience and i enjoyed the entire time. Firstly, i feel attractive by their ways of acting. They basically picked a scene and relationship between actors randomly. It’s interesting because they didn’t have any stripes. It attracts the audience because we would except what is gonna happening next steps. Sometimes, the incredible scene makes us laugh and it is pretty fun. Also, most of the scenes are about our daily life. So it helps make a connection with the audience. So, the random scene attracts the audience a lot. The changing of the emotion and scene is also impressive. For example, all actors have different theme in the freeze games. Also, the direactor stoped every scene in the funniest part, which attracts the audience to except the next step as well. The “propless” means there’s no props on the stage. So the “not a box” is pretty fun and interesting. Because it shows us how the actors are using the stages and their creati...

Revise WC

For start, the most important aspects I should work on is the analysis part because I didn’t have a strong thesis statement and explanations for quoted material. For the background and context information, i should more focus on Laura instead of Amanda and Tom. So I could talk all of her change through the whole book and also her personality. So I should strength the points that she is different from others and specifically mention about her glass menagerie, which shows how she differs from others. The background information should talk about more through the whole book instead of just focusing on the scene. For example, i could talk more about the relationship between Laura and Amanda. Talking about the gentleman callers is also helping to build the whole foundation of the story becasue gentleman callers is directly connecting with Laura, however, she doesn’t really care.  Also, for the thesis statement, I should concentrate on one points instead of separating them into different ...

Review B group

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11sGyv-2aGJchCnFcZeS2csU9YPhyHLRBk-vdS-MBGEo

Final draft video

https://youtu.be/ugNvDGYtEe4

in class writing

According to all the performance e had done for these days, there are server all points which makes the poetry connects with the audience better. First, the background music is pretty connecting with the peotry. Usually, we have some emotion that we would like to express. The background music as one of the elements in our performance strength the emotions. For example, Nan’s peom is depress and sad. So she choosed slow and sad melody music, which helps the audience more into her performance because of the music infect our moods. Secondly, the body language also plays an important role in the prformance. Most of us are using actions to connect with the peotry. For example, “to be able to walk along and see” is one of the stanzas in my peom, so I walk along on the bridge and pretend to look back. The actions help the audience to understand our peotry more about the details. Also, the body language is expressing our emotion at the same time. Helen’s performance could be an vivid example, ...