Lesley

Blog post due -- what do you need to revise on your drafts to show more clarity, conviction, commitment, emotion, and overall strengthen your performance. Be specific on what you need to revise and why. 300 words.  I think the most important points that we should revise is the connection between two characters because in our originally scrips. There is only one scene to show our connection, which does not really indicates the relationship of two stories. So I think we should add more scene about the relationship between two characters and details about their connections. For example, we could make them have some connection. They have been friends for long time and they write letter to each other about their life. In the letter, we could use some monologue to indicate their life condition. Also, for night woman. The facts about her son has already dead should be more appeartly to the audience. Because it’s kinds of confused for the audience to recognize the point without any wo...

1.  WHO AM I?   I’m acting as night woman whose husband is died. She is around 27 years old.  She works as a prostitude for Supporting her son. Her life goal is supporting her son to help him have a good education and have a better life.  2.  WHAT TIME IS IT?   Night at 2-3 a.m.  3.  WHERE AM I?     Haiti, her bedroom.  4.  WHAT SURROUNDS ME?   (Animate and inanimate objects-complete details of environment)    Beds, cigarette,  5.  WHAT ARE THE GIVEN CIRCUMSTANCES?   (Past, present, future and  all  of the events)    She had lover before who leaves and she is working as a prostitude.  6.  WHAT IS MY RELATIONSHIP?    She is the contrast of another character.  7.  WHAT DO I WANT?   She expresses her love to her son and also express her life situation is depressed and hopeless.  8....