Lesley Haiku

rock&Roll
Every time I heard rap，
I start to clap with rhythm.
use my hand to slap

music is map，
i would always clap，
musical flap in my mind.


joey：
I took off my cap，
i picked up the old mouse trap，
i started to clap

I took on my cap，
I snap the old mouse trap，
I was happy clapping.

I chose Nan's

"The clap from a tree,
The time a leaf leaves for dream.
It says, come with me."

I like her Haiku even though it has more than seven syllables for the second sentences, the meaning is attractive me a lot. Especially " come with me " which is impressive for me. I could imagine the picture in my mind through her Haiku. She makes me feel like she is not simply mixed all words, instead, the Haiku is filled with emotions. 

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