in class writing 3.9
1.
4, 7, 5
For literature, She clearly points out the main plots of her scene and Laura's change through the whole story. Also, she mentions the reason why she chooses these two scenes due to her perspective on the importance of the scene. She gives a really detailed analysis of the scripts not only the quotes but also her perspective that how Shakespeare foreshadowing in literature. I think she could also talk about the entire background of stories.
In the performance part, I think she could be more specific about how she expresses her emotion. For example, she could describe more about the movements she could use to explain her emotion in the fourth paragraph. However, she still offers a strong explanation about her emphasis on the scripts, which is one of the most essential aspects of performance. I think she could also talk about how they are gonna use the stage, which means each of the character's transform on the stage. She has a clear structure of her performance.Her structure is really organized and with proper language.
I think the most things that I have learned from her paper is her analysis of literature. I don't have the detailed analysis as well as she has. Also, her using of quotes is also helpful for me to think about what I should re-read the book since I only focus on our scene. Also, her reason to chose the scene is strongly convinced due to her analysis of the scene. So, I think I should more work on analysis the scene after I read her article.
2.
4, 6,5
He talks about his role separately by mentioning different aspects of Romeo, which is clearly indicating his role's characteristic.He also convinces his perspective by appealing some quotes and analysis. But I think he could more focus on why he chooses the scene by more convincing reasons. He points out specifically about his movements to show his emotion and the reasons, which I should learn more about it. He offers each of the reason why his voice and movements changes, which helps me learn more about his perspective of performance. But I think his literature analysis takes more place in his performance. He could focus more on talking about the stages and some detailed movements. He has a really clear structure and properties of grammar. Also, his variable of sentences is also impressive. So I think I should pay more attention on my literature analysis and my grammar and language structure after I read his IA.
4, 7, 5
For literature, She clearly points out the main plots of her scene and Laura's change through the whole story. Also, she mentions the reason why she chooses these two scenes due to her perspective on the importance of the scene. She gives a really detailed analysis of the scripts not only the quotes but also her perspective that how Shakespeare foreshadowing in literature. I think she could also talk about the entire background of stories.
In the performance part, I think she could be more specific about how she expresses her emotion. For example, she could describe more about the movements she could use to explain her emotion in the fourth paragraph. However, she still offers a strong explanation about her emphasis on the scripts, which is one of the most essential aspects of performance. I think she could also talk about how they are gonna use the stage, which means each of the character's transform on the stage. She has a clear structure of her performance.Her structure is really organized and with proper language.
I think the most things that I have learned from her paper is her analysis of literature. I don't have the detailed analysis as well as she has. Also, her using of quotes is also helpful for me to think about what I should re-read the book since I only focus on our scene. Also, her reason to chose the scene is strongly convinced due to her analysis of the scene. So, I think I should more work on analysis the scene after I read her article.
2.
4, 6,5
He talks about his role separately by mentioning different aspects of Romeo, which is clearly indicating his role's characteristic.He also convinces his perspective by appealing some quotes and analysis. But I think he could more focus on why he chooses the scene by more convincing reasons. He points out specifically about his movements to show his emotion and the reasons, which I should learn more about it. He offers each of the reason why his voice and movements changes, which helps me learn more about his perspective of performance. But I think his literature analysis takes more place in his performance. He could focus more on talking about the stages and some detailed movements. He has a really clear structure and properties of grammar. Also, his variable of sentences is also impressive. So I think I should pay more attention on my literature analysis and my grammar and language structure after I read his IA.
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